Kristoffer V. 48

Hej allihopa!

Nu har jag skrivit manuset till första scenen (introduktionsscenen) i första kapitlet.

Jag har skrivit på engelska eftersom jag kommer att använda det i min serie. ^^

Hoppas alla har det gött som vanligt! :D

”The prologue – a voice speaks, sharing background of the world where this story takes place, before being interrupted. The voice belongs to the main character who then proceeds to talk about herself, only to be interrupted again due to excessive and unnecessary information to a simple question.”

Employer: I don't need a history lesson thank you very much and as for yourself. I want to know about your work experience, strengths and weaknesses related to this job. Not about you goofing around in the streets, playing in dangerous areas!

Erica: I'm not playi....

Employer: I'll read through your papers first, then we can resume.

”Erica sits quietly while the employer looks through her papers. She quickly becomes bored and starts rocking the chair back and forth til' she falls, spilling her coffee machine budget hot cocoa all over the desk. It soaks the papers and stains the employers expensive suit.”

Erica: Nooooooo my hot cocoa! Even though it was passable at best, noooooo!

Employer: Noooooooo my 70 000 $ suit made from 100% finely woven Italian wool! Even though I have the closet full of them, noooooooo!

”Needless to say Erica didn't get the job she applied for and she walks home annoyed, more so for the employers attitude than her not getting the job. It quickly gets dark outside as it is late and Erica hears a strange sound nearby. It sounds like a faint cry for help and Erica rushes to the sounds source! A badly lit back alley where she catches sight of a beating! Without thinking she grabs the closest trash can and rams the thug who's beating the innocent victim!”

Erica: L.... leave that guy a....alone or....

Thug: Well would you look at that! Trash hiding behind more trash! This insect, you, all of you are the problem. This one in particular deserves a good beating!

Erica: I... I'm warning y... you!

Thug: This doesn't concern you, go play hero somewhere else kid!

Erica: Back off! I'm n.. not p...playing games!

”Slam!”

Thug: Urgh! You hit me one more time and I'll....

”Slam!!!”

”The thug picks up Erica by her braid and hits her in the stomach multiple times before throwing her in the same trash can she used to hit him. The seemingly helpless, hooded victim suddenly gets up and jumps the thug. They struggle and end up falling over an edge. The thug falls straight into a large garbage container and the victim on the ground right next to it. The thug tries to pull a fast one on the wounded victim just as Erica jumps down and lands on the lid to the container, hitting it right in the thugs' head, knocking him unconscious!”

Erica: Are you alright?

”Victim runs away”

Erica: wait!

”Police sirens can be heard”

Erica: I'd better get outta here!

”Erica leaves a post-it note on the container reading trashtalking trash”